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THE CHOICE

Yesterday, you chose. 60% to 40%. You put her in the chair.

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Tuesday. The annex, the last of the light.

She lifted the clip.

It came up off the page with the small dry sound of a thing that had not been asked to move in eleven years, and the folded leaf lay free on the blotter, weighing what a page weighs, which was the whole house. She did not open it. Reading was spending; she had a half hour, and the half hour belonged to leaving.

Method took her through the rest at a run. The sheet in the platen, photographed from three angles without a touch. The five pinned photographs, the empty fourth pin, the clean rectangle of wall. The shelves, the cartons, the pencil hand on the labels, one long pass down the room with the phone held level like a tray. She photographed the steel clip lying open on the blotter, because she wanted a record of the exact shape of what she had done to this desk. Then she slid the folded page inside the lining of her coat, beside the brass key, and the room went on being in order around the one place where it no longer was.

She left the cover folded back. She left the chair square. She left the sheet at its half sentence with its coat half on.

At the door she turned for one last honest look at the long room, the violets in the air, the dusk gone copper in the western gable, understanding that she had been offered a corridor and had chosen, with her right hand, to be the last person ever to walk it.

The padlock closed with a click that needed no key. She went down the swept stairs photograph first, past the landing window losing its amber. At the bottom she stepped over the sill and left the side door exactly as she had found it, propped on the iron doorstop, aired out of turn, by a hand that was not hers. Some other Tuesday would have to explain that door. She had a page against her ribs and thirty yards of glass to cross.

She crossed them at a wife's pace.

She was two steps inside the side door of the main house when the county road gave up the sound of his car.

The coat went on its hook, the one she never wore, the lining hanging heavy with two objects that would end her marriage if either of them fell out. She was at the island with a glass of water when his headlights swept the ceiling, and by the time the door opened she had turned the water into wine, out of sheer respect for the performance.

"There she is," Daniel said, in the doorway, the city on his shoulders. "How's the next town over?"

"Expensive. Corbin robbed me for the glass. The mat shop robbed me for the mat. I've been robbed all afternoon."

"You have the face for it." He kissed her temple, warm, unhurried, a man arriving home to his ordinary evening. "Thursday for the frame?"

"Thursday."

He went up to change. She stood in her bright kitchen with the taste of the lie in her mouth. It tasted like nothing at all, which she filed, and did not like the look of when she filed it.

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